On Saturday after rugby we went to Omarama and stayed in a motel. The next day we went to Queenstown for Nana DiDi's birthday, she was turning 70. My cousins came from Dunedin and Sydney, all together there was 14 people. We went skiing at Remarkables Ski field it was fun, I went on the chairlift with Tom and Dad. On the first day I went on the sugar bowl. On Thursday we went on the gondola and luge with all the family, I raced Tom, Dad and Zach. On Friday we all went out for dinner at the Lonestar for Nana DiDi's birthday and on Sunday we came home to West Melton. It was great to get home and see Bruno and Ella, as we had really missed them both.
By Liam Parker
13th July 2014
Thanks for sharing your holiday with us Liam.
ReplyDelete2 stars:
I like how you have remembered to use capital letters at the beginning of sentences and for people's names and places.
I also like how you have used words like after and first to tell us in what order things happened.
One wish
Add more detail, i.e. why was it fun, how were you feeling?
Mrs P